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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@11:37thanks! For the fav, too!
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@02:38^^ thanks!
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@10:52thnks!
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@10:49Hahaha it'd be an interesting sequel! Thanks!
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@09:28No, it wasn't. I've tried to find the source of that beep, but with no results. I don't know why, it appears when rendering. Sorry ^^U
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hippoinatutu Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2009
yay!!! :meow:
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A short film we made. I'll appreciate constructive criticism.
For more short films, go to [link]

Cast

Julio/Narrator...................Tadeo Crespi
Leonor.......................Sandra Fernández
Diana........................Verónica Sorgato


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Directed by: Álvaro Figuerola and Borja Pascual
Written by: Álvaro Figuerola and Borja Pascual
Cinematographer: Borja Pascual
Camera operator: Zinko Metev
Producers: Álvaro Figuerola and Borja Pascual
Producion assistant: Ricardo Tovares
Leonor design: Blanca Fitera and Julio Nebot
Make up: Verónica Sorgato
Atrezzo: Álvaro Figuerola, Julio Nebot and Borja Pascual
Sound: Tadeo Crespi
Music: Kevin MacLeod
Editing and post-production: Borja Pascual
Catering: Gabriel Fabozzi
Special thanks to: María Teresa Gil, Antonio Deltoro, Vicente Figuerola, María Teresa Deltoro and Juan Pablo Castillo
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Given 2009-08-30
Suggester says: Hasta que un dia by =Paskaler is wonderful, it has such a lyrical feel. It will leave a smile on your face. [Film & Animation >> Film >> Video >> fantasy] ( Suggested by Melusina and Featured by ElectrikPinkPirate )

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:icondjstrife:
DJStrife Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010
I felt some of the scenes were distractingly underexposed, but the feel and heart of the piece more than made up for it. :) Awesome job
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:iconborjapascual:
BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you! Yes... it was my first work as DP and I kind of messed up some stuff ^^U
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mazka Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010
Beautiful! Well done!
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:iconborjapascual:
BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
thank you! And thanks for the fav, too!
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billndrsn Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Cool! Added to colection here[link]
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:iconborjapascual:
BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks!
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billndrsn Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:nod:...:)
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All-Blue Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009
@11:37Wow...that was absolutely stunning!

:heart:
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:iconborjapascual:
BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@11:37thanks! For the fav, too!
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harey-eats-pork Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009   Writer
@02:38this is an outstanding short film. Just Beautiful......
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:iconborjapascual:
BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@02:38^^ thanks!
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Kitty-the-Waterbaby Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
@10:52Aww, that was so sweet! I loved the end. ^_^
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:iconborjapascual:
BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@10:52thnks!
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:icondragonliger:
Dragonliger Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
@00:52O.O... Esto me dio algo de escalofrios... las marionetas se ven bastante raras o... bueno como se diga dan cosa. de todas formas la pelicula esta genial.
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:iconborjapascual:
BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
xD no era la idea, pero mola. gracias!
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:icondragonliger:
Dragonliger Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009
si, lo se pero el miedo a los payasos causa reacciones como esta XD
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
xD
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:icongpotious:
Gpotious Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009   Digital Artist
This was creepy... And yet so fantastic. I loved it, the music, the acting... And the lack of words.

Congratulations on the DD! ;D
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks a lot!
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moofie1000 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
@10:49I really liked it, I liked how the story made sense even when there were little to no words spoken and in a different language, This is very well done. I would have liked to know how the husband felt about the mannequin the doll made at the end though.
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@10:49Hahaha it'd be an interesting sequel! Thanks!
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Morgue-Awall Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
@00:52What are the words said in the beginning? I don't understand the language he's speaking, would a translation be possible?
Over-all, good work! I loved watching it.
And congratulations on the DD. Well-deserved!
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@00:52Thanks! It's spanish, a rough translation would be:

The is the story of three beings and two loves
just like I remember it
just like they failed.

As you can see, it's not important for understanding the story.

Thanks for your support!
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Morgue-Awall Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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Glaurung-II Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
@11:37¡Qué bonito! :aww:

Se merece la DD.
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@11:37gracias! supongo que sí, no sé xD
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:iconyukistwin1212:
YukisTwin1212 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Writer
An amazing masterpiece. Well Done!
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:iconborjapascual:
BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Woha! I've never thought about any of my works as a "masterpiece"... thanks!
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:iconyukistwin1212:
YukisTwin1212 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Student Writer
Your welcome! You did a very amazing job! :D
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Joan-Kagami Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
@11:37Pygmalion? :D
great work, congrats on the DD.
I liked how you incorporated the music to the scenes
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@11:37That's it! Thanks!
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ShadowKiwi Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009   Digital Artist
hehe, you made use of the Macleod soundtracks :D
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Hahaha yeah!
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oo3oo Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
@11:37Like what ~blackrosekk said, I really appreciated that the film had no voices, because it can be admired and loved by people that can speak different languages. :)
Thank you, and congrats for the DD. :D
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
^^ thank you
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:iconoo3oo:
oo3oo Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
You're very welcome, thank you for creating. :)
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:iconbuzveatesh:
buzveatesh Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Professional General Artist
@11:32Great job :clap:
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:iconborjapascual:
BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@11:32thanks!
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EarthKnight Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@11:37Aah... this is great :) Made my day, thanks ever so much <3
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
glad to read it! Than you. And thanks for the fav!
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EarthKnight Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
No problem! You deserve it :D
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blackrosekk Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
@11:37I don't know if this comment can be considered as a constructive critique, but well I want to tell you that I appreciated a lot the way this film could communicate without words. The actors were so impressive! I really liked it. Much compliments!
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@11:37Thanks! I really appreciate your comment! That was what we intended, we tried to tell a story with no words. Film is a visual art, so we wanted to develop the whole visual storytelling aspect.
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blackrosekk Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
Well, it sure is convenient for us, poor strangers ^_^ thanks for your hard work and let us see some other works like this, I'll follow you ^_^
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
^^
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Infernova Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@09:28Was that sharp beep sound intentional? It hurt a bit when I was watching with earphones on
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@09:28No, it wasn't. I've tried to find the source of that beep, but with no results. I don't know why, it appears when rendering. Sorry ^^U
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theromantiquedead Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009
@11:37wow, i absolutely loved it! it reminded me a bit of edward scissorhands, maybe because of the music and all the mechanic-doll subject, but it was extremely beautiful and very well made! :heart: and congrats on the dd, this definitley deserved it!
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BorjaPascual Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
@11:37Thanks! We chose the music with Danny Elfman's scores in mind, so I think we achieved it! Thank you!
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